Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Neel Comments 5&6

5. I disagree with Nikki. I think that the ending is still very much a cliffhanger. There is so much that could happen to Lily you are left wondering how things turn out in the long run. Where will each character be ten or twenty years from now? If there was an epilogue written after 15 years saying how things are, good or bad, that would be a satisfying, clean ending.

6. I agree with Valeria on how each character has a new door opening. Rosaleen is free woman and finally has the rights she wants. Lily has begun a new life in a new town, with new friends. June is getting married. And August has to adapt to all these changes, from losing a sister (May) to gaining a daughter (Lily). This makes it seem like this i only part 1 of their stories and more is yet to come.

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